A TOY FORGOTTEN

by MaryPP

Once very special
Now this little lass
Snow White is lost
In a forest of grass

Lucy had loved her
So shiny and bright
Now this poor doll
Is lost in the night

Perhaps one day soon
Snow White will be seen
By handsome Prince Charming
In this forest of green

243rd Weekly Poetry Contest

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Hi Mary! Such a charming poem

Hi Mary! Such a charming poem with a little sadness that balances it so well. Your rhyme scheme is so lovely. A big Best Wishes for this gem. ☆☆☆☆☆

Regina

Hi MaryPP, First and foremost, welcome back. Your rhyming skills are second to none in this and other entries. The accompanying picture and the sentiments involved in this lovely poem work so well together. Your judicious use of colour Is something I really admire. “Snow White will be seen by handsome Prince Charming in this forest of green” is an example of that. The very best of luck with this outstanding work, Kind Regards, MyNAh_27

A TOY FORGOTTEN

A TOY FORGOTTEN

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Hi Mary! Such a charming poem

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Thanks very much Regina!

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Hi MaryPP,

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Thank you so much MyNAh, your

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