Anxiety: The Invisible Evil

Shall I defy those rigid fiends within?
For they expose my covert anguished ache,
And force my heart to linger ‘mongst my sins,
By delving ‘til my misery awakes.
O how am I engulfed by such disease?
For this domestic evil is fiction:
A made-up fear that sends me to my knees,
As I beg for a lull from affliction.
A battle living absent to the eye,
But drowning pure morale beneath the host,
Will urge the fiends to sheer intensify,
As those unstirred will neglect this woe most.
So allow me to wish I was naive,
To avoid these worries in which I grieve.


Comments

Clarice Hare's picture
Very cool archaic style! This feeling is common to those of us alive now just as much as centuries ago. It just needs a few tweaks here and there on the meter, since imperfect meter in formal verse can be distracting. For example, you could change "evil is fiction" to "evil is a fiction" in line 6 to make the meter work without changing the meaning.

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