Editing is a Love Affair

A very small part of her was terrified that she may be releasing her connection to her life altogether.

 
A very small part of her was terrified at the... possibility that she was releasing her connection to her life altogether.

 
And from somewhere deep was the whisper of a voice that was terrified at the possibility that she’d release her connection to her life altogether.

 
But from somewhere deep was the whisper of a voice that was terrified at the possibility that she’d release her connection to her life altogether.

 
But some part from somewhere within her deep was the whisper of a voice that was terrified at the possibility that she’d release her connection to her life altogether.

 
But some part deep within her was terrified at the possibility that she’d release her connection to her life altogether.

 
But some small, small part deep within her was terrified at the possibility that she’d release her connection to her life altogether.

 
But still, she was terrified at the possibility that she’d release her connection to her life altogether.
 
 
But still, she was terrified at the possibility that she’d cease to be.

 
But yet, she was terrified at the possibility that she’d simply just let go.
 
 
But still, she was terrified of being gone.

 
But yet, she just just could not untether.

 
But yet, some part of her refused to untether.

But yet, she refused to untether.