Tripping with Alek

by Fliss

Alek and I have chronic illness in common. We like to write trips for each other sometimes.

Let’s take a ride on a British Rail train,
seats chequered moss green and blue,
clattering onwards through late winter rain,
tables for four or for two.

Let’s order tea from a damp buffet car,
Styrofoam cups with tight tops,
maybe some shortbread, a sticky Twix bar,
white paper napkins for slops.

Let’s embark smiling in spite of the cold,
head for a turn on the pier,
breathe in the salt spray, watch folk young and old,
while a lone gull sounds a jeer.

Let’s find a café for haddock and chips,
watching tall ships through the gloam,
chatting and laughing about other trips,
back to the platform, then home.


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MyNAh_27's picture
Fliss, I’m deeply touched by this. Enchanting and evocative slant on things we might take for granted but never actually should. The very best of luck on poetry nook and other contests as always M

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Fliss's picture
Thanks, M.! I have severe arthritis and Alek has fibromyalgia, among other things. We really are a couple of crocks, but we find a lot of happiness in writing. Thanks for your good luck wishes; the same to you! F.

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Mohamed Sarfan's picture
Dear Poeter, Only when viewed from the proper place, is it possible to understand the true state of each. The mind stores the traces of a life full of realities as memories. Write More Congratulations

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