Whoever thought our misty eyes would meet, at distant crossroads, where voices in the sky would guide us, up enchanted pathways to an everlasting peak.
I really enjoyed reading these lines leading to that everlasting peak!
Did you think of making each line shorter or happier this way?
Best of luck Mynah!
Thank you, Mary PP, for your helpful suggestion regarding the lengt of each line.
I would be comfortable with a revised version of this poem.
The appropriate comma’s will be placed by me.
Once again thank you for reading my work and your advice,
MyNAh_27
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Nice imagery here--well done!
Lara Dolphin
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I really enjoyed reading
Mary PP
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Thank you Lara, for your
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Thank you, Mary PP, for your
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