Thank you, Mary PP, for your helpful suggestion regarding the lengt of each line in Above And Beyond.
I would be comfortable with a revised version of this poem. The appropriate comma’s will be placed by me. Once again thank you for reading my work and your advice,
MyNAh_27
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Lovely undercurrents, wry yet
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Thank you MyNah_27! I
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I love the lyricism of this.
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Thank you Miles T. I
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Such a beautiful, musical
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Thank you Ryan! I appreciate
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Thank you, Mary PP, for your
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