Tanka for Yuki-onna by Lara Dolphin When the moon shines bright,Calmly float out from the snow.Tall, ruthless terror,Let me touch your lucid skinFore you freeze me with a kiss. --published by Calliope 300th Weekly Poetry Contest Report violation Comments Excellent imagery, Laura. Excellent imagery, Laura. Concise work with superb flow between lines. Best of luck with this M Report SPAM Log in or register to post comments M-- M-- Thank you so much for the positive feedback. I'm glad you liked it. --Lara Lara Dolphin Report SPAM Log in or register to post comments Log in or register to post comments
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