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HALF MOON RELAXING

HALF MOON RELAXING

by MaryPP

Last night I saw the half moon
lying on her back
looking so relaxed and calm
in a sparkling starry black.

We say the sun is a man
the moon a lady we know
our sun is strong and powerful
but the silvery moon is aglow.

228th Weekly Poetry Contest

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Lovely undercurrents, wry yet

Lovely undercurrents, wry yet thought provoking. Imagery and metaphors strong. A credit to you, Mary PP. Best of luck with this, MyNAh_27

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Thank you MyNah_27! I

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Thank you MyNah_27! I appreciate your encouragement very much!

Mary PP

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I love the lyricism of this.

I love the lyricism of this. Nice.

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Thank you Miles T. I

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Thank you Miles T. I appreciate your comments very much!

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Such a beautiful, musical

Such a beautiful, musical flow. This reads so nicely. Great stuff, Mary :)

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Thank you Ryan! I appreciate

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Thank you Ryan! I appreciate your comments a lot!

Mary PP

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Thank you, Mary PP, for your

Thank you, Mary PP, for your helpful suggestion regarding the lengt of each line in Above And Beyond. I would be comfortable with a revised version of this poem. The appropriate comma’s will be placed by me. Once again thank you for reading my work and your advice, MyNAh_27

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