Wind Chime Soul by MyNAh_27 The child within us weeps on marble headstonespallid wilting flowers, scattered plume of wreaths harpsichord of heartbeats waltz on grey day sandswind chime soul ashes float on afterlife clouds 300th Weekly Poetry Contest Report violation Comments So musical and flowing, M. My So musical and flowing, M. My deepest Best Wishes for a win. ~ Regina Report SPAM Log in or register to post comments Hi Regina, Hi Regina, I value your kindness and friendship. You are an extraordinary poetry pal. Many thanks. M Report SPAM Log in or register to post comments Good juxtaposition and word Good juxtaposition and word choice. The poem has good flow throughout. Best of luck. --Lara Lara Dolphin Report SPAM Log in or register to post comments Log in or register to post comments
So musical and flowing, M. My So musical and flowing, M. My deepest Best Wishes for a win. ~ Regina Report SPAM Log in or register to post comments
Hi Regina, Hi Regina, I value your kindness and friendship. You are an extraordinary poetry pal. Many thanks. M Report SPAM Log in or register to post comments
Good juxtaposition and word Good juxtaposition and word choice. The poem has good flow throughout. Best of luck. --Lara Lara Dolphin Report SPAM Log in or register to post comments
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So musical and flowing, M. My
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Good juxtaposition and word
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