Grey vapour sated clouds extend their chain
Of rainy bursts and torrents at a glance
The hoarse throat whine from canyons weren’t in vain
As green shoot tillers bow to circumstance
Rush petals weave a chain of svelte romance
On river banks where oak beam timbres fall
Coy sika deer among his peers may crawl
Beyond that wetland canvass oiled at birth
An embryonic chain encodes its wall
With nascent human trails to cosmic mirth
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M,
M,
omG!!!! what a monumental and
mesmerizing literary creation. I forgot to look and see if this masterpiece is in
the contest, if not, it should be, if so,
my very enthusiastic Best Wishes for a win. ~
Regina
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Regina,How can I thank you
Regina,
How can I thank you for such a glowing review?
Under pressure I wrote this fiendishly difficult poem in a relatively short period of time.
A Dizain is a challenge with so many pitfalls.
I value your advice and support.
Massive goodwill to you and yours,
M
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This poem was published in
This poem was published in Poetry Soup and was a medal winning second place contest entry.
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Great poem!
Great poem!
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The perils of a Dizain are
The perils of a Dizain are numerous. Sending my heartfelt congratulations on your victory!
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