The richness of our own neighbourhood
is the exception, the calm voice over says
at the point when the imaginary cameraman
has swung out to a distance from the earth
where galaxies appear as distant stars,
small and far apart. This loneliness
is the norm, he says, then turns
the camera round, heading back again
to where the film started out, the lake side
in Chicago, the couple sleeping
after a picnic, their blanket on the ground.
The camera zooms in on the hand
of the man but doesn’t stop there, goes
deeper in, sliding like a beam
of radioactive light to show the worlds
that wait inside. Finally we come
to the heart of an atom, two electrons
dancing in a circle, in a tight embrace
of mutual attraction. Deeper down,
chaotic darkness swirling, empty space.
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Wow, two electrons dancing in
Wow, two electrons dancing in a circle, in a tight embrace of mutual attraction. Deeper down" I love the metaphorical play of the story here. You have a very significant mind. I enjoyed this one.
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Dear Poeter, The poem is very
Dear Poeter, The poem is very interesting as it focuses on the impact that the art form of cinema has on the mind. Behind every scene or event, the human mind begins to explore such realities and lessons. All The Best My Dear Friend; Write More Congratulations
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